I had a dream last night that we were friends. best friends.
That you knew my middle name and I knew yours.
We talked and hung out late.
When It got dark we went outside for a walk.
In my dream we toke film photographs,
of the stars and passing cars.
Never have I had a dream that felt so real,
I could smell the autumn trees and the scent of a campfire,
It was like I knew you my whole life,
You were happy and so was I
You told me all about your day
and it felt good to just talk.
To just sit in the grass and just not care about anything,
but you.
I stared at you for along time,
and then you said,
"Someday w.."
A bell rang through the air and you broke like glass
and then you said,
"Someday w.."
A bell rang through the air and you broke like glass
and that's when I knew you were a dream.
I stared at my bedroom ceiling for what felt like an hour.
It was nice to pretend that we were real.
Wow. I like you. This is good. I really like the last lines.
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Wow. I like you. This is good. I really like the last lines.
ReplyDeleteCheers to you.
This was really really good. I can't pick a favorite line but i loved when she broke like glass and was cut off short of what she had to say, I love it.
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ReplyDeleteWhy didn't someone show me this sooner?
"A bell rang through the air and you broke like glass
and that's when I knew you were a dream.
I stared at my bedroom ceiling for what felt like an hour.
It was nice to pretend that we were real."
The music was a good touch as well.