Monday, March 11, 2013
Not In Love
I saw your picture
Hanging on the back of my door
Won't give you my heart
No one lives there anymore
And we were lovers
Now we can't be friends
Fascination ends
Here we go again
Cause it's cold outside
When you coming home
Cause it's hot inside
Isn't that enough
I'm not in love
Could it be that
Time has taken its toll
Won't take you so far
I am in control
And we were lovers
Now we can't be friends
Fascination ends
Here we go again
Cause it's cold outside
When you coming home
Cause it's hot inside
Isn't that enough
I'm not in love
I'm not in love
I'm not in love
We are not in love
We are not in love
We are not in love
We are not in love
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Oh I hope u don't mean that! These posts sound so beautiful, and u and this girl sound so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteu write about love better than anyone else, I just don't want it to end.
I like all the poetry you post. I'm a big fan of poetry. But I also like poems that have different structures. Most of your poems look and sound a lot like songs. Have you tried any different forms? Like free verse poetry with some sentences that are a lot longer and even continue for several lines? I'm not saying you should change your whole style to please me, but I want you to try some different things on your blog.
ReplyDeleteBlog. Blog. Blog. Blog.
Blog is a weird word and I've posted too many comments tonight. Sorry if this all makes no sense.
I love this. I love your pictures that you take too.
ReplyDeleteActually this post is a song by Crystal Castles/Platinum Blonde, the one I linked at the top. Sorry if I didn't make that clear.
ReplyDeletethanks for the great advice, ill switch it up.